tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8674093574208594111.post3808207427112277609..comments2011-12-06T20:12:30.154-08:00Comments on Eng 215: Cognitive Filters?MJ Garasihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02876694248077757303noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8674093574208594111.post-12836775739604084592011-10-25T20:13:48.209-07:002011-10-25T20:13:48.209-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.MJ Garasihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02876694248077757303noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8674093574208594111.post-23667452214351084602011-10-08T02:00:00.511-07:002011-10-08T02:00:00.511-07:00Mary Jane,
I enjoyed your paper. It was readable a...Mary Jane,<br />I enjoyed your paper. It was readable and well written. Your information was good and went well with your thesis. Although you were about 200 words short. A few spelling errors, but overall good paper<br /><br />KimKim Eng 215https://www.blogger.com/profile/08546861967766079863noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8674093574208594111.post-70785487310657838242011-10-07T12:40:53.521-07:002011-10-07T12:40:53.521-07:00MJ, Your paper is well written. You have good stat...MJ, Your paper is well written. You have good statistics and I appreciate that the cognitive, scientific approach of your paper. I believe that there should be some more works cited (perhaps the amount the top three companies in America spend on advertising) and a link to some research of the effects of advertising on children. <br /><br />I think with this new research you will be able to hit the 1,000 word count. <br /><br />Good paper, but is incomplete. You're almost there! -sugki jessica suguitanSugki Jessica Suguitanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16725933228325341275noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8674093574208594111.post-46202584415565704052011-10-04T23:59:15.462-07:002011-10-04T23:59:15.462-07:00Mary-Jane Garasi,
You take an interesting stance ...Mary-Jane Garasi,<br /><br />You take an interesting stance on this topic. Its seem that you are saying that ads have a negative impact on children but not on adults. I think you can argue this effectively without straddling the issue. <br /><br />You do not meet the minimum word requirement for this assignment. <br /><br />Try to find some articles that support your claim that adults can turn on filters and therefor are not affected. Then counter the studies that show most people including adults are affected by ads.<br /><br />If you quote 4 lines or more its needs to be properly indented, but on our blog is says not to use quotes that long and to paraphrase if needed. There are a few capitalization and spelling errors but nothing major.<br /><br />You are on your way. Keep up the good work<br /><br />Mala ArkinMalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04249469441412678407noreply@blogger.com